"These seals looked like giant blue lines over the sky.. and they radiated just like a rupture. But instead of chaotic energy, the pure, refined energy that a mage channels emitted from the Seals, as they opened. What came forth from the seals were giant, huge ass ships. They completely overshadowed the city they were enter. They were white, and looked like a huge floating castle of some sort. From what appeared, they looked to be at least the size of New York City, if not more."
Is 'huge ass ships' a good description to use? And isn't the fact that they're already giant a little redundant?