LSD

[Talbot Linsorim]

LSD

Laughing,
I still hear your screams,
Begging for your sanity,
Life has long left such sullen eyes.

Singing,
I still see you crying,
Begging for your forgiveness,
Life had long left such velvet tones.

Dancing,
I still feel you moving,
Begging for your final rest,
Life has long left such weary legs.

Lonely,
I still smell your tears,
Begging for your companion,
Life had long left such love.

Solemn,
I still taste your blood on the steel,
Begging for your end,
Life has long left such mercy.

Dieing,
I still stare at your mangled flesh,
Begging no longer you possibility,
Life has long left such peace.

I hide your needle within once again.



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When I wrote this I forgot that LSD can't be injected intraveinously (sp??) but reather comes in stickers and such due to the usual high potency so ^^;

Any more critiques?

[Fukushuu no Mumei]

Dying has a "Y" in it.

-=}N{=-

[Talbot Linsorim]

it looks sooo wierd. are you sure?

[Fukushuu no Mumei]

Yes.

-=}N{=-

[Talbot Linsorim]

Changed it in my home copy! domo!

[Fukushuu no Mumei]

mouse said:

domo!

Much what?

-=}N{=-

[Talbot Linsorim]

*shoots the person who told her domo was thanks, blush*

arigato