Forest of Thorns

[Junpei]

Friend of mine is the lead guitaist for his band, Forest of Thorns. I was writing a song today, here it is. Tell me what ya think, meant as a Hip-hop/rock mix.


In the begining it was fun
Days flew by like and nights were long
All we had was each other and life was good
Then you picked up and said let's move on
Where'd you get that idea?

My world came down like a house of cards
My life fell apart as you walked away
I couldn't deal with that pain and you didn't even care
You thought a break was the best
Where'd you get that idea?

I moved on and forgot about that life
You came back and thought that life was back
Aparently life came down on you to
You thought a break was the best
Now where'd you get that idea?

So here we are back at the start
Only now I know better
You got left behind and my life moved on
Maybe now you think we can be together
Now where'd you get that idea?

[Price]

Sounds like something I wrote when I was 13.

Take that as you will.

[Fukushuu no Mumei]

What pain did you have to deal with?

-=}N{=-

[Junpei]

None at all it was totally random. It's being modded by the band now ^^

[Fukushuu no Mumei]

junpei said:

None at all it was totally random. It's being modded by the band now ^^

Oh... ok. I see a lot of poems that complain about things that never happen to people. It's offensive.

This is becomming a song?

-=}N{=-

[Junpei]

Yeah a Fort Minor hip hop/rock mix. I'll post up the final result.