Brandon (Tech)
Spell Caster
Videnskabsmand
True power, like true beauty, comes from within
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Post by Brandon (Tech) on Feb 11, 2007 21:53:06 GMT -5
I destroy with my right hand, for it is Wrath. I consume with my left hand, for it is Greed. My stance is tall and unyielding, for it is Pride. My heart howls for the pain of others, for it is Lust. Feelings of light are crushed under the weight of my suffering, for it is Sloth. My chest burns with insatiable hatred, for it is Gluttony. My soul aches with the pain of a thousand broken dreams, for it is Envy. The world has better prepare, for I am coming ((I was gonna have this as the siggie text for a char I'm working on, but it's too long  . The agony! ;p)) |
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Onira
Student Teachers
TEH CRAZY SUICIDAL FALLING-TO-EARTH GUY
Yeah. It's THAT cool.
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Post by Onira on Feb 12, 2007 17:53:33 GMT -5
Too deep! The pressure! Crushing me! Too much deepness! COOL!
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Post by Damien Kross on Feb 12, 2007 22:36:50 GMT -5
The line for Greed better fits Gluttony.
Your line for Envy was excellent.
The line for Lust is a bit off to me, as the sin isn't about pain at all, but of actual sexual lust.
Your sloth line just plain throws me off... I don't see how it pertains to laziness at all...
If I sound like an ass, sorry. Just giving an honest review with a few pointers.
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Post by The Keeper, Engal on Feb 17, 2007 6:00:13 GMT -5
The line for Greed better fits Gluttony. Your line for Envy was excellent. The line for Lust is a bit off to me, as the sin isn't about pain at all, but of actual sexual lust. Your sloth line just plain throws me off... I don't see how it pertains to laziness at all... If I sound like an ass, sorry. Just giving an honest review with a few pointers. Lazy Fat people can roll over and crush you. That is how it pertains to laziness. Fat People can crush you with their weight, Fact noted, secret kept. |
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Eyvindr
Apprentice
Beware, for I am obsessed with pointy objects...
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Post by Eyvindr on Feb 17, 2007 14:06:15 GMT -5
Oh, but if FAT people crush you, then you'd have to crush people with Gluttony, not Sloth.
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Post by The Designer on Feb 17, 2007 14:11:44 GMT -5
The line for Lust is a bit off to me, as the sin isn't about pain at all, but of actual sexual lust. Hmm, I thought Lust was the "will to do" (Vague, I know), not just screwing people.... |
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Post by The Judicator on Feb 18, 2007 21:54:56 GMT -5
The line for Lust is a bit off to me, as the sin isn't about pain at all, but of actual sexual lust. Hmm, I thought Lust was the "will to do" (Vague, I know), not just screwing people.... Keep in mind a bunch of fucking NUNS thought this up... |
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Post by The Keeper, Engal on Feb 19, 2007 21:25:25 GMT -5
Oh, but if FAT people crush you, then you'd have to crush people with Gluttony, not Sloth. False, most fat people cannot eat nearly as much as most skinny people. "Fat" is how your body stores energy you are not using which is why it is (Sloth). A person that eats a lot is not guaranteed to be fat. So gluttony is pretty much ruled out, Clear? |
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Post by The Judicator on Feb 19, 2007 22:25:25 GMT -5
Oh, but if FAT people crush you, then you'd have to crush people with Gluttony, not Sloth. False, most fat people cannot eat nearly as much as most skinny people. "Fat" is how your body stores energy you are not using which is why it is (Sloth). A person that eats a lot is not guaranteed to be fat. So gluttony is pretty much ruled out, Clear? Burned |
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Post by Tristan Knightrhode on Feb 22, 2007 16:04:08 GMT -5
False, most fat people cannot eat nearly as much as most skinny people. "Fat" is how your body stores energy you are not using which is why it is (Sloth). A person that eats a lot is not guaranteed to be fat. So gluttony is pretty much ruled out, Clear? Burned in the worst way >.> nice enough, i agree with Jester on his points. though to a lesser degree. EDIT: about the sig. if you have it scroll through, like Ark has on 552, it should work. it might be too big a file but its worth a shot. |
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. The agony! ;p))
